The True Theme Behind Henry David Thoreau's Walden

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Though many may think otherwise, Henry David Thoreau exemplifies the overall theme of Walden as he states “if one advances confidently in the nature of his dreams, and endeavors to live the life which he has imagined, he will meet with a success unexpected in common hours” (263). Within this paragraph, Thoreau uses his ethos, diction, and an incredible metaphor to put light on the true thesis of his novel.

In this paragraph, Thoreau indirectly recognizes and inevitably admits that the true, most successful lives are not those that endeavor to live in the woods but rather those who endeavor to live the way in which they want to be. Life, then, is valued in the eyes of its beholder. Later, he realizes that if one lives life the way he or she wishes to live it happiness, is inevitable. If you live the life you have always wanted then “solitude will not be solitude, nor poverty poverty, nor weakness weakness.”

Throughout Walden, Thoreau explains his two years, two months, and two day experience in what many today would call solitude. Living out in the woods near Walden Pond in Massachusetts, he thoroughly explains the benefactors of nature without civilization by his discovery of enlightenment, himself, a sense of purpose so called the world. Here he calls it his “experiment” where he “put some things behind” and lived “with the license of a higher order of beings.” In it of itself, this is Thoreau’s story; it is the same story where he gave up society, a home, humanity and countless other relatives of civilization in order to acquire a new outlook on the world, one that let him look past all the fog that lies obstacles in life and, as a result, place himself upon the brightest thinkers humanity has ever seen.

After recognizing his ethos, the reader comes across a use of diction not very common throughout Walden, one that is extremely simple and direct. Thoreau’s word choice is here quite simple, with the most troublesome words possibly being: liberal, proportion, and solitude (Yes, ironically the most troublesome words are hardly at all troublesome). Through his use of simplistic sentence structure and short, sweet sentences, Thoreau established a sort of rhythm that made his paragraph all the more striking. His words and their use hit home and develop a sense of awe.

The last crucial piece of his paragraph lies as what I’d like to call a hanging metaphor, or a metaphor that is not explained but rather sitting there to be, or not be, picked up by the reader: “If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them” (263). In other words, no aspiration or dream can be too big; all that remains after they are dreamt is the hard work and life required to fulfill that individual’s desires.  

Outsourcing: Bose on How it May Not be Too Catastrophic

Though many would like to argue that outsourcing negatively affects its host country through loss of jobs and a larger wealth gap, Indian architect Apurva Bose reveals a few clues as to why it may not be that bad after all. Making many strong claims, one of the first Bose is makes is that “the outsourcing bandwagon is experiencing unprecedented growth” and that will inevitably force some sort of economic change. This change after all may not be a bad thing, for she also mentions that outsourcing develops strong relationships between companies and between countries and therefore enable cultural exchange. This exchange, entirely due to technological advancement in communication, can happen easily and swiftly as if the two parties were ten minutes down the road from each other.  The last major claim Bose reveals to us is that from outsourcing comes a sense of inter-economic dependency between the two parties. By monopolizing work forces in certain populations outsourcing can unfortunately eradicate any sense of individuality within that field. However, for anyone to understand her claims one must realize the true reason as to why countries like China, Mexico, and India are so attractive to western companies—they provide means of which to hire a cheap workforce and thereby save money for the company.

Apurva Bose’s voice throughout her editorial functioned as a key rhetorical device. Working with her incredibly simple diction, it was able to produce an article appealing to the reader. Though many recognize “outsourcing” as a trigger word, Bose approaches the issue in a very practical manner. She comes across very neutral and extremely sincere, not at all authoritative. By using simple word-choice and an adequate  grammatical structure, Bose enabled herself to become relatable to the reader which could have made a huge difference pertaining to the fact that this editorial was released in London, England.  For example, her juxtaposition of argumentative paragraphs allows the reader to flow from one reason to another and understand how they are connected. Lastly, she personifies outsourcing as something that “seeks the blessings of an unswerving relationship and an understanding between the two parties involved.”